No Surrender 2nd Part

Yazan:

If you forget the first part, you can click this to see first part :)


No Surrender 2nd Part
     The crew hoped that the smoke was the sign of their victory but when they arrived at the place, they saw that all were left from 50 tanks were just 5 tanks. They were afraid but at that moment. Heinrich said:” You are the soldier of the Nazi Army. Pull yourself together!” He said that but he was afraid too. After other 4 Tiger Tanks were destroyed, Heinrich made a decision. It was a little crazy but it would help them to achieve the mission. They destroyed the bridge which was the only access point to the Reichland. (I do not whether you know but in a war, no one wants to destroy a bridge.) The crew withdraw because the enemies have more tanks than 10, and the crew was not want to get hit. The crew went to the city centre, and they slept. In the morning of the following day, they woke up with the sound of the enemies’ engine. They were all surprised. They did not know where they were going to go. So, one of the crew had to get off the tank and made an observation. The youngest person of the crew, Hans, was a volunteer for this duty. He got off the tank. Hans made his observation and came back but they heard a loud noise.


What do you think? The noise was a sign of something good? Or... bad?

Comments

  1. 666thsense18 March 2019 at 01:00

    You should try to draw these scene and share them with us. It will be perfect like comics.

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  2. Zehra Narçıın 18 March 2019 at 18:39

    Your imagination is perfect and very strong.. I 'm waiting for next writing.. :)

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  3. Zeynep Begçecanlı18 March 2019 at 23:49

    It is better than the old one. Keep imagining please ☺️☺️

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  4. merv.19 March 2019 at 12:13

    Very interesting text. Like film, thank you your interesting story.

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  5. ÖMÜRCAN19 March 2019 at 23:14

    I think the noise was a sign of something bad because your stories end badly. Maybe you've changed it. I'm waiting the last part of your story

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  6. wendeilichty20 March 2019 at 09:58

    In my opinioin the noise was a bad sign because if this story takes part the nazi army ,this can be bad.I liked this story,and I'll wait patiently next party.

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  7. Can20 March 2019 at 22:38

    Noises are always bad signs! Can't wait for the next. :))

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  8. Serendipity at the door9 June 2019 at 10:09

    It is always Hans if there is a German in the story.:)

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